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COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY CAUSING YOU DISTRESS??

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"My son's honors' English teacher had incorporated the college application essay as an assignment, so he handed in his essay that he did with you. She had virtually no comments and told him it was well written! Thanks so much for coaching him!"
-- a Reading, Mass. mom

As college application deadlines loom, parents and students admit that the essay is the number one task students dread, avoid, or wait to tackle last minute. Yet it is a vital tool for providing depth to your application. The essay introduces the person behind the grades, scores, and extracurricular activities. And it sometimes makes the difference between an acceptance or rejection from your desired college.

Let me help you with your application essay.

I am a freelance writer for The Boston Globe and a published author of personal essays, articles, and stories. I hold a Master’s Degree in Public Relations from Boston University, and a Bachelor’s Degree in Magazine Journalism from Syracuse University’s SI School of Communications.

I help guide students toward passionate essays that reflect their personalities and unique qualities. While the essay alone cannot help a student get into college, my students have been quite pleased with their acceptances.

I will not write the essay for you! We will discuss the content and the messages your essay provides about yourself. Then we will adjust words, sentences, and paragraphs so you and your writing are effervescent.

This is how I work with a student:

  • If you already have drafted an essay, I will review it and work with you on edits--or suggest a different topic if recommended.
  • If you have no idea what to write your essay on, do not worry! We will discuss ideas and work together on a first draft.

Hours:  Flexible daytime/after school, evening and weekend hours. Online services available, too. See link for details.

Location:  We will meet at my office (The Place for Words & Workshops, 200 The Great Road, Suite 254A, Bedford, MA 01730) or your home--whatever is most comfortable for you. Or we can meet at Starbucks in Bedford and walk to my office from there. Online services are available, too!

Fee:  Rate based on an hourly fee of $80/hr through September 30. October through March the rate shifts to $95/hr. (Economic hardship discounts available.)

Additional Information: I also work with students with learning disabilities, using a unique process that makes writing the essay much easier for them.

References: BEDFORD: Annie Leslie, University of New England freshman; Jamie Reynolds, UNH sophomore; Jessica Reynolds, UMass senior; Mel Serotkin, American University sophomore; Kevin Johnson, Quinnipiac sophomore; Nicolle Hickox, Seton Hall University sophomore; Kristina Piccirillo, Middlesex Community College sophomore. BURLINGTON: Mike Vardaro, Worcester Polytechnic Institute freshman. NEWTON: Parv Mital, University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign freshman. CONCORD: Tim Morse, Wentworth University freshman.

Click to read sample essays:
Sample Essay #1

Sample Essay #2
Sample Essay #3

This article from The Boston Globe (see link below) expresses several important points about college essays:
  • The college application essay is only part of the application, and while it alone won't make or break your acceptance to a particular school, it could be a deciding factor.
  • The college application essay should convey qualities at the heart of your character and be a great example of your personal self-expression.
  • The college application essay can be fun, not a dreaded task!
  • Enlist the help of "an English teacher"...or in this case, my professional services.

http://www.boston.com/news/education/higher/articles/2008/09/14/college_application_essay_should_reveal_your_character/

Contact Mindy to discuss working on your essay via the Internet if you are not located in the Greater Boston area. Same fee structure applies (see fees below).


Mindy Pollack-Fusi/College Application Essay Coaching
781-275-7301  theplaceforwords@gmail.com